i guess love
will have to wait
until rocket launchers
and secret police
in not-so-secret
camouflage
quit smoking
and cock-fighting
on foreign borders
Author notes
damnit- sorry, just had to get this out
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest - 2000 points for Gold by Nicole Hanna.
3500 points, ended March 15, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Spanish?
Shirley, No tengo gusto de los poemas de la guerra, sino que realmente encontré éste absolutamente divertido. ¡Continuar el trabajo impresionante!
(Shirley, I do not like war poems, but I really found this one quite funny. Keep up the awesome work!)
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me no gusta espanol! muchos gracias mi amigo-hermano <3
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OH!!!
Is your sweetheart in Afghanistan? 
Wonderful poem, dearest one! I always admire your poems and think you might be getting an A+ in English. 
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Not yet, I talked him out of volunteering for Iraq duty, but now his whole unit is being sent to Afghanistan this November (most likely), though these things have changed in my favor before. :s
I am remaining hopeful, glad you liked it darling Mum. <333
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rah
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We all need to just get some things out, its just good that when you get something out...you express it with beautiful words instead of senseless violence.
sincerely,
Shadow
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love never waits. Some fools just can't take the time to recieve it.
Love, Tom B.
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Es Fantastico!
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gracias mi hermano!
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Loud and clear...Truth for all who have loved ones in the WAR.
Blessings
Good luck in the contest
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get it all out baby. believe me i understand.
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ranting is fun, even if i do sound like a crabby bitch-
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nice. loved it. you shouldve thrown this in my argentina contest. haha
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lol- what this rant? haha, you're too kind, but thanks
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you could change the name of the title and it wouldve fit in perfectly. just an observation i couldve kept to mylsef, but chose not to. hahahahaha. great write though.
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LOL You know, normally I dislike writes on war and politics, but this just sang. It wasn't preachy, and... honestly, could be read on many different levels.
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lmao, i know what you mean... i actually don't give a fuck about the war, i just wish it didn't have to take my honey with it. :[
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