Because of the deep scars you left in my heart
My whole life is falling apart
I can no longer love
I don't want to live
Because of the pain you had to give
You were my first love
And you'll always be
I just look to the skies above
And ask that you will come back to me
You left me in sorrow
Left me in pain
No more of my love
Will you ever gain
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Anything for Anyone (come have a look!) by I-Feel-weightless.
450 points, ended April 1, 2007, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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its amazing. it flows so well and has so much emotion!!
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This is good. It flows well and it shows how you feel. Good job, I can totally relate. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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This is great! flows so nicely, expresses so much and still sticks to that one topic. And I love how it began. That first line was amazing, started this up with a nice hit to the head. Love it all
P.S. this is Clint -
Wow. Short, quick, and to the point. True point, and next you should write about a girl talking to a guy, b/c all of yours are about wishing for him.. =]
~WU
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