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I'm There

I'll be there to help you
When you're down and drowning
While you're down and frowning

I'll wallow with you too

 

No need to cry alone

No need to weep or moan

I'll be there to dry those tears

And hold you up through all the years

 

I'll celebrate your proud moments

I'll cheer you so you won't fail

When you're a mess

I'll make sure you don't derail

 

So remember when you're depressed

Call me and I'll help out

Find away to save you when distressed

I'll make you smile, erase your pout

 

        ~Kaitlin W.

 

 

 

 



 

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To let my friends know that I'm there for them, if no one else is.

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  • Kevan
    March 15, 2007

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    Very nice poem Kirk. Every stanza's got a different Rhyme Scheme. This semmed to work out very effectiuvely. Great message too. Keep your friends close Kaitlin!

    ~Kevan~

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    March 14, 2007

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    sweet

    Very nice. It's important to stand by your friends and be there in their time of need. I hope they do the same for you. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian