Welcome to the darkness, breath in the air,
welcome to the darkness, welcome to my lair...
your stuck in the fortress of my land,
trapt in the darkness of my hand, wraped tight,
squeezed...unable to breath...stuck in the
fortress, bound in chains, trapt in the doubled minded
maze... unable to resist the power, of my gaze,
welcome to the shadow, cado, welcome to my shade
your the one cado, I wanna evade...
welcome to your death,welcome to your life,
now your my demon, heres your scyth.
A contest entry
- Hate Me, Kill Me by thorlorn thanatos.
380 points, ended March 30, 2007, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow
I loved this! Very well done. keep the ink flowing! =]
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Wow.I loved this write.I would love to be in this poem.Great job my friend
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ooh!
This was dark and very well written! i love this! it kept me captivated till the end! Awesome use of metaphors.. and... this was just brilliant! keep writing! >.<
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Amazing job, as usual Dante. keep this up and i'll have to steal your talent... lol, jp Hun! Cya later. *hugz*
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I enjoyed your write. So much to say but so little time! I like how you, I dn't know hell i loved the whole thing it flowed so wonderfully!
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nice work
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There's a lot of spelling mistakes that distract me from the piece but the content is extremely good. IM me if you want me to edit this, I'd gladly do it
Hope you're well, thanks for sharing. La x 
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this is a very good poem. it shows your dark side and it shows what a dark prince you can be.
Alianne Nightseer -
hmmm
I want a scyth!!!i liked your poem i always like dark poems they make me feal like im at home.its a wonderful write.cant wait to see more dark and creepy stuff.
-maddie
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warning warning danger up ahead man with weapon! lol i luv it its like a guy you kniw the good boy at heart but a bad bay image with a little spicce
like its cute yet dangerous iluv it good job smiles
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Wonderful!
Woah. very awsome write! thank you for the welcome! I would be faythful to you for eternity as your demon. I love the way you wrote this, very creative, and I loved the flow! great job!
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