Oh my lord! I've found my twin!
Tall and long, surprisingly thin.
I was taking a bath and oo la la.
You'll find my twin at every spa.
It's the opposite to soft, prickly instead.
Like my pet peeves that get to my head.
Smell it now, you might like the soap.
Or maybe not, with me please just cope.
That's only the head, check the body sides.
It's even the shape of my hips and hinds.
It's just like me, silent till it gets a chance.
I'm noisy and loud, but shy at first glance.
And this objects use, is just like me too.
People use me, for everything They should do.
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By RIP Whoever. turned 12.
A contest entry
- (extended one more day-need more entries!)48 HOUR CONTEST (round 2)!!!! by Rianna Bear.
475 points, ended March 18, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I can relate
This was so sweet/funny/light hearted!
Good luck in my contest
*Rianna
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Aww this is cute How you could write about being a scrubbing brush is really clever! And then liken yourself to it! Really creatibe
God luck in this contest my dear
Grandma xxx
Gaylene
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