Hi, Miss Fairy
How was your day?
My day was great,
I had one of the best days of my life.
I got an amazing grade on a hard test,
and I got an invitation to my best friend's Birthday Party.
You know, Jenny, I told you about her,
she's the one who's mom always makes the best things for bake sales.
I can't wait for the party,
it's going to be a sleepover at her beautiful house
but it's two weeks away, and I don't know if I can wait that long.
Wait, what's that you say, you had a good day ,too.
Well, I've got to agree with you, there,
there's no way that your day was better than mine.
Oh, you're getting tierd?
Okay, then I'll turn off the lights.
Good Night, Miss Fairy, see you in the morning.
Author notes
POEM FOR LAUREN
A contest entry
- WRITE ME A FAIRY TALE..PIC INSP!!! by lori1.
410 points, ended March 19, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That was cute.
Though the blue font colour is blinding on the beautiful fushia background (seiously I love fushia)
It sounds like you are talking to your diary.. or just your imaginary friend.
I just saw the pic.. Nice and cute
Anyways, I liked this poem..
Keep on writing,
(do something about the font colour though, like bright pink..)
Nooni
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hi you have spelt tired wrong. this is a lovely poem i love the pink background thank you for your poem is is really good. good luck in my contest
lori xx
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