Towering over expanses so great and far, the brittle yet immensely powerful giants command the gods of the air over fightless battlefields.
As the titans float, suspended by nothing but their own science, they transverse through the entire planets fragile atmosphere, carrying thousands of souls to far-off land they rarely attend.
As these creatures scream with their power and majesty, they are felt with the deep rumbling terror they emit wherever they spread their wings.
Welcome to the airport!
A contest entry
- M a n g o G e l a t o I n I t a l y** by madgirlslovesong.
450 points, ended April 11, 2007, 10 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LMAO cute, yes it is very poetic, although I would suggest more of a formed structure in it, so as to let it read smoother. Other than that, very well done write. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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Smiling....
You did good with this...
I would go ahead and split the lines up...
make it a style all your own...
I love that it was about an airport... very good...
Heidi
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Not exactly a typical poem, but then what is a poem really? Poetic writing, i would say. And this is poetic writing... so good job!
I liked it, it's metaphorical and descriptive, and imagery filled!!
Thanks for enetering!
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