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freinds for never

you can have freinds,
you can have them for ever,
but some times you can have them for never,
you can hold on for a year,
but the end is near.
you cry
but freinds don't last you for a life time
so rember
you can have freinds forever
but you can have freinds for never

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  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    May 23, 2007

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    Though, we must remember, friends for never sometimes contribute something great to our lives, even if they aren't around forever. But, if they are around never, they they were never around so contributed nothing at all, 'cause they were never there.

    Great idea and message, but needs to be cleaned up, spelling and if you use punctuation use it throughout or don't use it at all.

    Friends for Never

    you can have friends,
    you can have them forever,
    but sometimes you can have them for never.
    you can hold on for a year,
    but the end is near.
    you cry,
    but friends don't last you for a lifetime.
    so remember,
    you can have friends forever,
    but you can have friends for never.


  • cactus thorn
    March 14, 2007
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    I was just thinking the same thing last night.

    Thinking of my real friends and then friends who come and go when there is something going on, or if they benefit from being around me.

    Friends for never, very good way to describe these people.

    Good poem, well thought out.