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The End

It would be so merciful if it would just come

I think it might every single day

Not the end of the world

Just the end of me



Taking that one last breath

Finally truly free I would fall into an eternal sleep

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  • Jeff.W
    March 15, 2007

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    you know by my other comments what i think about this.i can't stop you bout what you think but i can say this again if you die or anything like it alot of people will miss you and want you back.


    • Saosin
      March 15, 2007
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      i know but most times i feel useless thats usually the time i write poetry