Its the way you look at me.
Its the way you stare.
Its the way you talk to me.
Its the way you smile at me.
Its the way you do all these things
That is making me go crazy.
Its the way you touch me.
Its the way you are always near me.
Its the way you act around me.
Its the way you have that power over me.
Its the way you do all these things
That is making me go crazy.
Its the way you make me hate you.
Its the way you make me love you at the same time.
Its the way you make me want to hit you.
Its the way you make me want to kiss you at the same time.
Its the way you do all these things
That is making me crazy.
So stop.
Please.
Cause I'm going crazy.
Author notes
Yeah. Its how I feel bout someone. I kinda like this. But tell me what y'all think plz.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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alright this was good. but i swear if you say 'its the way' one more time i shall hit you over the head with a waffle. try doing something like.
"Its the way you make me hate you.
And love you all at once.
How you pull my arm to hit you.
Desiring to kiss you in the same fleeting moment."
then its a bit less choppy and monotonous. by all means do it how you want. but if you want to work on improving it you might want to do a bit of editing.
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I think this is deep and full and I know what it and who its about ok. i will ttyl ok byebye
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This is a great way of expressing your emotions to the one you love, well done dear poet great write
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OMG! This was like wow when i read it i was like nu uh u didn't make this up...it is waayyyy to good! I love it its to good for words. But I'll try ummm..its deep and full of a lot of emotion. Im gonna bookmark it and print it off when i can alright? I love it that much and idk its just a really goos poem Lissy!!!*hugs* keep up the good work...and hes a good inspiration...lol Love u tons! *hugs*some more lol
Love Always,
~!*Katty*!~
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