To the shallow minds,
The deepest thoughts are lost.
But the truth never finds,
Those who sin has crossed.
Her face is not the same,
Nor is she unspeaking,
In a world without blame,
And in which the bad is leaking.
So gaze into her eyes,
And you might find something new.
Her smile only lies,
But your eyes might too.
Author notes
Picture inspired
A contest entry
- Image Inspiration #8 by Grey Mouser.
425 points, ended March 29, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For the nice people of ap.(strong language) by Floorboards.
600 points, ended March 17, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think this one was a little too deep for me..but none the less it made me think...
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lol, thank you
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hmmmm, very interesting. Makes one think, lol, don't know if I am up for that right now. But let me give it a try anyways.
Hmmmm, nope just can't. Is a very good and deep write. Thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
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lol, thanks
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LOL, so close and yet so far. Better then nothin LOL.
Really liked the poem and was just not able to put my thoughts together to give a good comment, like I usually try to do. -
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lol, it's okay
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Great write...Very intriguing thoughts on the picture.
Good Luck in the contest
Blessings
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Thank you
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good poem, very thought provoking, thank you very much for entering and good luck,
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Thank you so much
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very good
speaking from the shallowest of minds i think that will me my new motto great write keep doing well
love papa
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