golden garden of the heavens
crying with all the pain of
all the black tears running down his face
down to earth for all
the pain of tomorrow and today
curses of the past and future
tears ever flowing from the angel of sadness and pain
forever they will fall for the hatred and evil of the earth
Author notes
new one!!!
A contest entry
- dealing with a guy who does not want to step up and take responsiblity by allfaith.
305 points, ended April 11, 2007, 11 entries
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650 points, ended April 17, 2007, 27 entries
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Good
Very interesting and perseptive ask some of the inkwell to look at it i think theyll love it
you have a good flow to your writting
and you write from the heart it would be a perrrr fect intro to death trance
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Wow
So deep and dark. My faveorite part was:
golden garden of the heavens
crying with all the pain of
all the black tears running down his face
down to earth for all
the pain of tomorrow and today
That was so dark yet graceful. Great job and best of luck in your writing future. -
Good! I like the words you use. Good imagery! Thanks for entering and good luck!!
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nice i love the way you potray this poem. thank you for entering and good luck in my contest
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