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Misery

misery just accompanied her, she embraced it as her friend.

no matter how good things started out, misery would be the end.

 

 

 

 

she took it everywhere she went, like a cloud, it hung overhead.

it greeted her in the early morning and went with her to bed.

 

 

 

 

no happiness could she found, her only contentment was misery.

no smiles, no laughter, no joy, was how she chose it to be.

 

 

 

 

she thought misery needed company, a sad and lonely mate.

it had to be one who, like she, in all things could find hate.

 

 

 

 

she met him on a summer day, as she sat complaining of the heat.

misery told her to ignore him because his smile was just too sweet.

 

 

 

 

he approached her all wrapped in joy and offered her a taste.

she tried so hard to resist for in misery she needed to baste.

 

 

 

 

the closer he got, the more she felt the serenity of his soul.

this wasn't what she sought, so him she began to scold.

 

 

 

 

"leave me and take your joy, I refuse to again travel that road.

I once carried joy in my heart, so much it seemed to explode."

 

 

 

 

she told how she gave her love but in return got only misery.

it was how to her love was shown, it was all that she could see.

 

 

 

 

still he came despite her words, came closer with his joy.

bringing her to a standstill he said, "I build, I never destroy!"

 

 

 

 

misery was dismissed that day,

it had to seek another home.

together with him and joy she dwelled,

never again to misery did she roam!

 

 

marjorie joyce leslie

03/14/07

 

 

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    excellent

    Perfect imagery and metaphors
    Searching for love............
    The alleritation is perfect as well as the flow
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 17, 2007

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    STUNNING!!!!!

    STUNNING WRITING HERE. LOVE THE RHYME, LOVE THE FLOW, AND LOVE THE MEANING OF THE PIECE. WONDERFUL SENTIMENTS HERE. KEEP WRITING.

    WAYNE


  • astralshepherd gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    life and its journey, the soul searching for love and meaning - feels wonderful, much like a novel but compressed and compact in poetic form. reads aloud very well, alliteration is perfect on the ear. this has the flow of a seasoned poet, one who has seen life from all sides. blessings and best wishes, ~richard


  • Diamond
    March 21, 2007

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    Excellent

    It's so strange how misery seem to accompany us on so many of our journeys in life, that we tend to embrace it as a friend not knowing that there is something better and more worthwhile out there. I liked this poem, it's like a little story wrapped up in a poem. You gave misery a personality and in the end, sent him on his way. Avril


  • I-Feel-weightless
    March 17, 2007

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    Awesome

    This is a really great write. I read it three times, and enjoyed it more and more each time. Good luck and thanks for entering!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 14, 2007

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    Awesome Write!

    It is hard to be hurt in anyway, or be shown that you're not appreciated..It destroys the soul...and it is hard for one to love again from the pain and memories of the past. I can understand this. But it's so sad that when someone sincere comes along, and tries to show one love that's been hurt before in a relationship of any kind..They begin to shy away from fear they feel this is to good to be true, or it may turn out like the relationship before..So it's hard on both parties..I always hope to believe and have faith in the long run though, that love will conquer all! Much love hun, and thanks for sharing you. All the best in this contest too! -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo PS. Love the background

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