Drawn to each sweep across the satin sheets
Above me, below you; bodies rock with heat
Neck to hip to thighs, a rushing friction grows
Collisions of lustful passion creates the sweetness down below
Intoxicating energy drives a deeper thrusting flair
Nourishing this primal lust, we both gasp for air
Giving up the inhibitions, to let ourselves fly
Whet with passion, escapes breathless moans and cries
Imbedded with your dagger, made of human steel
Trails ablaze of euphoric waves, a heat so very real
Heaving pleasures bring the flash of light we seek
Frenzied culmination, sure to leave us weak
I beg, yet still, to take us even higher
Ravaged bodies, souls, filled with immense desire
Explosive ruptures close this dancing with fire
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Hot, Hot, Hot!!!!!
Did I say this hot, it is one hot sizzling poem, you have done a gret job capturing that urgency that lovers feel, playing with the fires of their passion, excellent write, thank youf or sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Thank you for the great comment, really appreciate it.
Storm
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Whoa... Okay, now I think I need a cold shower! That was awesome, a pleasure to read, from beginning to end! You're an awesome writer, keep up the good work!
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Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
Storm
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Wow that was so hot you truly lite a fire, so full of vivid images. It flows so well. Very well written, awesome!!
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm
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very hot babe got me all worked up!!
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Oooh, ow!
Ooh, that is very hot! I think I need to open a window here. Cuz it sure is getting warm in here.
..Forgive me for not reading some of your most recent stuff. It's just been hard to get myself to read such hot and exploding stuff like yours. I've been having troubles.
But don't ya worry, I'll get back to reading you. Soon. This here was a very nice start! I think I just may take one or two a week. You're just way too damn hot for me. 
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Thank you, thank you. I am honored by your words. Appreciate it hun.
Storm
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Oh yes you definitely know how to light a fire!! Still the Goddess for sure. Thanks for the stimulating write.
Jeannie
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Thank you so much Jeannie. Pent up heat had to come out somewhere
. Appreciate it hun.
Storm
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Hot Fire
YOu have written a firey poem here that takes the reader along for the ride, great job, blessings John
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Thank you so much John, appreciate your words.
Storm
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Whew girl! You sure know how to write these pieces that get the blood pressure kicked into overdrive! Very well done!!! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much Sandy. Spent the last three days literally burning up, and this just kind of flaired from it, so I'm glad. Writing seems to be so out of my league lately, and I hate that. Appreciate the comments hun.
Storm
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