I'm lying here
So cold, so still
Completely lifeless
My heart has been torn out
My blood is spattered all around me
Has anyone noticed?
No, no one is left to care
They've all died or abandoned me
My life is in shreds
I'm just barely holding on
I'm lonely, scared, hurt, and angry
I'm dying and no one cares
My life has been completly pointless
All I've done is screw up other peoples lives
Why me?
A contest entry
- The Darkness Within by XXStOlEn-HaLoXx.
600 points, ended March 15, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ahh... I want to hug you and tell you all will be fine,oh and hun you haven't screwed up jeffs or my life infact you've only made it better
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dang never knew u were this depressed
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I know EXACTLY how you feel! I feel this everyday of my life! this is very good and good luck in the contest
love alwayz and foreva
~~SK~~
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