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xKill_Me_Break_Mex

Grab my arm and whisper things you’ll never say
Rip your throat out and it doesn’t matter anyway
I’ve captured your heart so I control your mind
Just close my eyes and wish me dead
Everything that you said...

Twist my hair around your finger
As I slip away
Bind me to your spirit, so I never stray
And cut my wrist so I can bleed
There is something sick in you taking over me.

Stab my tongue and burn my eyes
Real love it’s not a surprise
Please say you feel the same
A simple cry from the legally insane
I can be dead if that’s what you want
All I know is my mind cant take this
So kill me now and just break it.

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  • Lauren Noir
    June 6, 2007

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    This is good!
    The rhyming is a little cliche but rhyming is really difficult, and you worked it
    The images were strong and emotions ran thick
    I loved it
    Well done