Years of friendship, years of trust
Nothing in a 24 hour day of dust
Hatrid fills the eyes of the reciever
Looking on, drowning in another deciever
Christianity and faith tell me to forgive
So hard but must do in order to relive
Seconds go by like hours of sinnin
Asking and Praying to god to be forgiven
But now above all is the hatrid that flows so far
A life thats been mislead is all that remains hard
For betrayel and fighting is all that comes out
Never thought this would happen but its happening without a doubt...
Fire burns inside as I say those ever so hard words
"I forgive you" but never to recieve the same surge
We once had a great thing going on as friends
Promised each other we'll be tight till the end
But how can we ever be the same; i ask it
sure your forgiven but I'll never.. ever forget.
A contest entry
- Anything for Anyone (come have a look!) by I-Feel-weightless.
450 points, ended April 1, 2007, 19 entries
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KINDA SCARIY BUT REALLY AWSOME
DUDE BECAUSE I NO YOU I REALLY WANT TO NO THE STORY BEHIND THAT!!!! PLEASE CALL ME OR TXT ME PLEASE!!!!!! OH YEAH ABOUT THE POEM IT WAS REALLY GOOD AND FLOWED LIKE A PRO!!!!!!!!
ASHLEY
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Wonderful
I love this! You did an awesome job! I can really relate to this, especially right now! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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