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The Way to School

As we roll along
we all yell "Come On!"
As we pulled along the side
of the road, some kids hide

But thats OK, they don't know
how cool it is to ride so low
on this school bus
that won't let you cuss

When you get on
you'll go by a pond
on your way to school
but you may not think it's cool

But we think it's great
you may be bully bait
but hey! its the way
to get to school instead of paying

For gas in your car
and getting drunk in a bar
you get to go
and stay in school instead of being low

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 15, 2007
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    lol, yea it is

    Thanks though

    mem


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 15, 2007
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    Thanks, actually its supposed to be assong the kids sing or something, lol

  • goalsv
    March 15, 2007
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    Very nice job, wonderful poem for a bus driver!


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 14, 2007
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    Thank you both! I am so happy you think the kids will like it. It was fun to make up


  • angelsslayer
    March 14, 2007
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    Brings back memories! Love the style to this, great write


  • Tabitha-Robin
    March 14, 2007

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    Wonderful

    This is so wonderful. I loved it so much. Thank you for your entry. I enjoyed it so much. Thank you and I wish you the best of luck in this contest. You have a talent so true. I think the kids will love this one.

    Thank you again and Good luck in the contest.

    Have a wonderful day.

    Tabitha Robin
    http://www.tabitha-robin.com

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