I never knew I could love anyone like you,
I never knew I could care the way I care for you,
I never knew I could find love,
That would be forever true,
That's the kinda of love I found when I trusted you
Please tell me what you think
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awwwww that is so pretty but i think maybe if u tried a little more u can make it longer like if i was u i would write after wat uwrote...........
i never knew u would play with me like that
i never knew u would pretend that u cared
i never knew u would actually break my heart
i dont knw but most of my poetry is abt lost love and ppl that dnt care but maybe that has never happen to u.......but something like that woulod be a piece i would rite!!! hey but i still loved it is awosome is great that u have found someone u truly loved!!!!!!!!
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A sweet poem! Simply and lightly done.
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wonderful
Awww, this is so sweet and I know how love feels. I'm in love right now. Wonderful poem! -
Simple and heartfelt! Good use of repetition.
~:|Poettrical|:~
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This says it all - sentiments so well expressed, so easy to read and understand. Great that one finds this kind of love.
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Aaaaw! How beautiful! What a lucky person to have someone write such a sweet poem.
I sure as hell want that to be me...lol but I won't say anything. But Amazing job. Keep up the great work!
Tori
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I think the third line is missing a word. It's probably the word 'knew' Other than that the write was good. The last two lines were good lines to close the write with. Good job!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker who lost all
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