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Way Back Home

No matter
No matter how much I've strayed,use to be the good girl
Now ruled by sex,drugs and rock
Traveling down this never ending spirl
Everything's so out of control
Finally saw what loved ones thought of me

Number one sinner
The devil's gothic child
I'm the worst of many people's fears
Everytime I'm walking down
I see the hate in everybodies eyes
Now a believer
I'm just trying to find my way back home
Now I'm delivered
Now I can just finally shut my eyes

Number one sinner
The devil's gothic child
I'm the worst of many people's fears
Everytime I'm walking down
I see the hate in everybodies eyes
Now a believer
I'm just trying to find my way back home
Now I'm delivered
Now I can just finally shut my eyes

They say that evil comes disguised
Like a city of angels
I'm walking towards the light
Finally found my own path
Doing it on my own

Now a believer
I'm just trying to find my way back home
Now I'm delivered
Now I can just finally shut my eyes
Now I finally found my way back home


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  • Andrecious
    May 10, 2007
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    great that gives me some ideas for another poem i hope you don't mind


  • PerVirtuous
    March 15, 2007

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    I like this very much! You are a very talented writer. Thanks for sharing. Three more bunnies for you!


    • Trixie08
      March 15, 2007
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      Thank you so much that really means alot to me.


  • Blue Azure
    March 14, 2007

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    glad you found your way back home, nice use of wording and repetition. enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.


  • XxXAtreyuKingXxX
    March 14, 2007
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  • Bas
    March 14, 2007

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    its nice t oread about once being lost and being set free once you have seen the light its the best thing you can find in this world we live in , theres nothing to compare gods love to , nothing in this world is worth living without god i am happy for you to have found him in you're life and have found a place in heaven and you're name is in the lambs book of life

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