Little broken girl
Imaginary world
Made of confusion
Lost illusion?
Safe here inside
The place I hide
Crazy they do say
Gone another day
I like it here
Nothing to fear
My little world
Accusations hurled
The wall too high
Try and you'll die
Nothing gets in
This way I win
I'm always right
No need to fight
This is my game
I take no blame
World so perfect
Just what I expect
This wall protects
You have no effect
In my eyes I see
No one good as me
Do not even dare
For you I don't care
Dreaming while awake
Sanity can not take
What I have created
My rules I stated
Medication can't cure
Too gone I assure
My imaginary world
In my head swirled
A contest entry
- Who Are You... Tell me. by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 16, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Your poem is amazingly awesome. You have great talent.
You deserve the trophies you got. If you really had a world, what would you call it? your world sounds good... can i join?
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NIce..... I love the nonsensicallness of it all... very... Alluring.
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This is good. Clear emotions running through it.
In line two:
"Imgainary" should be "Imaginary"
And in lines twenty-eight and thirty-three:
You have forgotten the apostrophes in "don't" and "can't"
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck!
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