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Fight With Your Words

Fight with your words
for you will see
that all your words
will help thee

Fight with your words
for you will find
all your troubles
left behind

Fight with your words
not with a gun
for this is what
begins the fun

Fight with your words
for all you think
will make you a better person
in the end

Fight with your words
for you will see
the peace will come
and there it will be

Fight with your words
for then you'll know
that you can think
instead of kill

Fight with your words
for you will see
all the pain
death causes thee

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  • cryincherub
    March 15, 2007

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    I like the flow and I honestly like the poem however my family has served in every war...So I dunnoo


  • line shakes
    March 14, 2007
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    i like the flow, especially the ryhme. you are absolutely right, if only we care to sit and talk for a while, there will be a solution. if only we love, if only we care... very nice piece. provoking thoughts..