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Masturbation

Towels, tissues, socks, and even empty hands.
Fucking Forbidden.
And if you do? Guilt.
And if you don't? Insanity.
So we keep writhing in our bed sheets,
Waiting for some mythological, righteous union
Where all we have to look forward to is finally
Fucking.
But we wait and writhe in our bed sheets,
Pumping load after load into empty hands.

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Just trying to stir it up.

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  • polynices
    March 18, 2007

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    i love how you put fucking on its own line, word use incredible, wait and writhe, finally fucking, fucking forbidden,


  • cosmotion
    March 15, 2007
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    don't forget to make yerselph happie.



  • sugarstar
    March 14, 2007

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    the accumulation of trust before semen makes it that much better. i believe.

    trust lasts longer than an orgasm anyway.


  • line shakes
    March 14, 2007

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    !!!!

    smiling here.i sense desperation, loneliness.. very well written. i like this one.. because i think it is fact.