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Heaven Sent

We now have one, and soon will be two,
So please let us share the joy with you!
Come to this shower a blessed event,
Help us welcome what Heaven has sent!

A contest entry

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  • serenity silvermoon
    April 9, 2007

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    dear uncle
    this was cute uncle great job very short but straight to the point i cant wait to read more of your wonderful poems thanks for sharing you are a great poet and a great uncle and friend let god bless you and keep you and love you till the day he takes us home keep on wrighting and we'll keep reading love your niece dianna lee green aka serenity lynn silvermoon

    • goalsv
      April 9, 2007
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      Thank you! Just thought it would be fun!


  • sommerregen
    March 17, 2007

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    Oh, how sweet! A wonderful poem to welcome a newborn. Thanks for sharing.

    • goalsv
      March 18, 2007
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      Thank you for the positive comments, I am glad you liked it.


  • jjbreunig3
    March 14, 2007
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    A cute ditty...

    A cute ditty; short and sweet, just like a new born baby; nicely done.


  • Princess Ayeka
    March 14, 2007

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    Very short and very sweet, I don't how I am going to judge this contest, and you're only my thrid entry. Good luck!


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    March 14, 2007

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    Cute!

    Awwww!
    This is so cute!
    I loved the rhyme and the flow.
    Good job!
    Twas' short and very sweet.
    Good luck in the contest!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all

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