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There is nothing


I had dreamt about you numerous times
Yet those dreams are long gone now
And the images I once held dear
are slowly fading away
in the darkness of my mind
where no light reaches

And slowly but surely
the feeling of missing you
is starting to miss from my life


Months of daydreaming
Imagining of how sweet our reunion could be
Still tasting the last flavor
of your lips pressed on mine
Such sweet thoughts that crossed my mind
a thousand times
Memories of past joy that grew
in pleasure each time i visitted them
Now suddenly mean nothing


There is no joy
there is no sadness
there is no anger

All the emotions you've once sprang
have all long passed away


Smiles of joy
Tears of sadness
Cries of anger


All is gone
All is wasted
And all that's left
is an empty shell
waiting to be filled again
with any kind of emotion
to make me feel again
Anger, pain, sadness, joy, hope,...  
I'd settle for anything

But the shell got harder again
and for now is buried in a sea of not caring

There is no joy
there is no sadness
there is no anger

There is only me
and the choice of becoming a statue
or choosing reserrection

 

but for now...

I don't care




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  • PintSize
    March 25, 2007

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    i always think to my self that i hate generic comments on poems. for this poem i dont really have too much to say. i really liked it and i believe it is relatable. everyone feels this way at some point. my favorite part is when u mentioned how the memories used to increase in pleasure each time u visited them. (visited... not visitted) the way u worded that made me think of a memory as an object rather than an idea. the only think i really that could use some work is that this piece of writing is very... overdone. that u could have been a lil more creative? less generic wording and more specifics? great work tho! it is beautifully written and i love ur wording!! also never forget if something hardens... just soak it everything softens eventually...


  • ericalachea
    March 14, 2007

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    wow! i absolutely love this piece! it speaks to me and i can relate to it so well! excellent job with just letting the emotion flow! you have an amazing talent.
    ~erica~