understanding the words to a song
would be the key to my heart
read between the lines, search my wants
read me like a book, I don't mind
at least try
Author notes
By RIP Whoever.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 6, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so wonderful. It's intense, but soft and lovely, breathy as if spoken in whispers of love late at night. I love the theme of this poem; it's just so nice---and so true too. This poem has a wonderful poignancy to it. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
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lovely
well written. such meaning in so few lines. i really like this, reminds me of an impassioned plea to a lover. if only the ones we really care about would try as hard as we like to understand us.
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Nicely penned! If people could just look at each other a bit closer it's amazing what wonderful things we might find
My best to you in thsi contest.
Gaylene
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