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this is not an exit

an inescapable void,
the words won't leave my eyelids.
sleep never comes
though i seem to often enough.
digging through tunnels,
and taking the bait, man.
inhuman as i am,
this is my last bit of empathy.

this confession has meant nothing.
my nightly bloodlust has overflowed
into my days and i feel lethal.
this is not an exit.

the sentences uttered -
abandon all hope ye who enter here,
because i am back,
better than ever, and bored enough for anything.

her shriek so chic,
this is the only way i know
to tear down the boundaires
that culture builds up,
an endless sea of filth...
the words won't leave my eyelids.

Author notes

the american psycho references are councious and deliberate.

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