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My Body Will Not Handle This

The pain in my heart will linger on in time like the epitomes of flame. Tormenting my soul into an eternal damnation of that of the most depraved times of wars waged upon this earth.

My spirit has died and corroded into time itself, lost in the fourth dimension as if it never existed. My mind has become the most sadistic mind this Planet Hell has ever had to tolerate and bear.

The lungs inside have collapsed and breathe in dust and ash. The alcohol of life has eaten my kidney like a hungry child devours an ice cream melting away onto the little child’s hand covering it like a storm cell embodies a city waiting to strike with all of its might. My livers in my interior construction do not work anymore.

My body will not handle this. The only thing inside that will not die is my malevolent tongue that spits curses like a serpent spits its venom.

Love has leased no room in the hotel of lust and seduction. It has forgotten that love costs money and I have no currency on my world of poverty.

Society has isolated me on a baron wasteland to starve and dehydrate and to travel to the very centre of insanity. The authorities want my capture but they will never find me where I am. I’m not in this world anymore; I’m on a land not on this world but on a planet on the outskirts of the Milky Way. This world is governed by the Seven Gods of Chaos and they do not let me sleep in a world reeking of havoc.

Reality now will not serve me any good as I have become as unreal as the fact of there being a God. Pathetic morals, values and beliefs don’t mean anything to me anymore. I am too discoloured to see the colour of the discourse that I should see. The volumes of lethargy have reached their peaks on a 6,000-channel mixer.

My body, mind and spirit are too drained to function in a normal way. Nothing can stop me now, I’m a freight train unleashed from the tracks of Hell unto the realm of man. The people of this earth have unlocked a demon they cannot control or defeat in a battle meant to be lost.

Rage has taken over my body like a virus infects a human body. Watch me now as I ignite reminiscent of the great fires of London. My world now is an ashtray; putrid, polluted and insanitary.

My body will not handle this. The only thing inside that will not die is my malevolent tongue that spits curses like a serpent spits its venom.

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  • ForgottenMemories
    September 17, 2007
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    Wow, this was a absoloutly amazing write! It was powerful and full of emotions. I would have read and commented on your fabulous poem earlier on but wasn't able to so I am sorry you had to wait.
    Well written, I loved it!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Sleep-N


  • xirshilittleperrax
    April 27, 2007

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    COOL! I like this work... this is relly good and powerful. It's got so much emotion... it's relly good.


  • hopelessly-broken
    April 20, 2007
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    wow this is so powerful... so much emotion
    i liked it how you repeated this "My body will not handle this. The only thing inside that will not die is my malevolent tongue that spits curses like a serpent spits its venom. "

    also i think if you spread this all out more it would add more to it, thats just a suggestion tho..

    take care, much love
    XoXoX

    • virtual-darkness
      April 21, 2007

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      thanks for the comment. yeah i thought the same about spreading it out more. and this one i wrote after some pretty screwed up things happened so it means a lot to me. i will edit this and spread it out. take care of yourself.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 15, 2007
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    Welcome to AP

    Very well done! A most excellent and expressive write; I very much enjoyed this! Looking forward to reading more; please let us know if we can be of assitance in any way and again, welcome to the site!

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