Draped in black silk,
Her skin creamy white,
She is a rare beauty,
Who lives for the night.
Her name is Alyona,
She lusts for your soul,
Your resistance is futile,
You are in her control.
She smiles so sweetly,
You’ll drown in her eyes,
Her lips are pure poison,
One kiss and you’ll die.
But you’re drawn to her mouth,
Eager for just one taste,
And as her fangs sink deep,
You’ll die in her embrace.
Bittersweet blood,
Fills her with delight,
Alyona awaits you,
You are hers tonight!
A contest entry
- well....im not sure. by xrain dancerx.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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short sweet and perfect. lolz. its an awesome poem! thanx for entering and good luck!
*hugs* tay. -
This is very well written!!!! More enticing than erotic in my opinion. But, that's just my opinion!
~DAWN~ -
I like it. Excellent Vampire poem. Very dark and sets the atmosphere really well. Flows really well and great imagery
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nicely done i really like ti well done good luck and thanks a bunch for entering
cass xx
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O.o
I love this poem...its very good...keep it up....
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