Wonderfully witty and so full of charm
Gotta step lightly, she may handcuff your arm
Great sense of humor, no time for any crap
Has writtings in her head you know
That conjure as she ponders
Living young forever
In wonderland at times
She tells our fondest dreams of love
On a flowered sheet of paper
Creates the image of a daring king
That glistens in the moonlit waters
Living in her glorious home
Of stone & nearby flowers
Heated by her heart so warm
Writing beauty before the storm
Archway to her front door
Lit with sights of passion
Loving life in many ways
Sends her passions far
For all of us to hear
Thanking her in every read
What appreciation is for
Her wonderful heartfelt reply
Leaves us all wanting more
HAPPY BIRTHDAY *TIA*
Author notes
Happy Birthday to a very caring friend!
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday Soulfultia! by debilynn.
600 points, ended March 16, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is such a sweet gift of poetry. The picture feels so inviting. I can see the gate start to open the more I stare at it. A great treasure that I am sure will honor her.
Sam
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Thank you so much Sam for the beautiful comment and the indepth look you took at this write. I think she is a real sweetheart and deserves the reccognition she always gives to others in such an honourable way. Also thanks for the gracious applause. I so appreciate it coming from you. You have such a great appreciation for poetry that inspires all of us that know you, Don
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Beautiful Write
with a touch of humor...A well written piece in dedication for her birthday.I am sure she will love it.
Good luck in your contest
Blessings
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Thank you!
I find Tia to be a very honest and open person with much talent and a big heart. I have been lucky on AP to have such friends her and you and many others. It inspires us all to have people that respond to our work in a positive manner and with truly honest commenting. I just have to figure out how to keep two fingers going fast enough to keep up!! HA! For a two fingered typist I am doing ok for now. I may in the future have to go to voice activated!! LOL. Thanks again, Don
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beautiful! thank you for entering
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Thank you debilynn for your comment and thanks for having a cool contest for a very nice person, Don
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Sweet
This was a very sweet gesture and I can't thank you enough for the kind and generous words you speak, shy about being in the spotlight, but honored you are participating in the contest. I had to have Debilynn judge the contest herself, I couldn't bring myself to choose between some of my favorite poets on AP! Thank you so much for your tribute on my Birthday you sweet man
~Tia
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Credit goes where credit is deserved. In your case I have only seen good things from you and all the friends at AP for the great work and kind person that you have been. It is our pleasure to let you know you are appreciated by many. Keep up the fantastic work. One of your many friends, Don
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Beautiful write, and I feel you have aptly captured her soul with this write, great work!
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Thank you for such a complimentary comment and applause. I'm glad you see the qualities of this fine poet and person as we all do, Don
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Fabulous birthday tribute to Tia! She is one of the most caring and friendly individuals to grace the pages of AP and no one is more deserving of a precious dedication than she. She opens her heart and soul in her work and she always takes time to read others and offer her feedback. She's an amazing, talented writer. She's just an all-around wonderful lady. She's also giving me a run for my money for "sexiest granny" on AP!
LOL Excellent work, my friend, and a lovely pic to go along with your piece. Best of luck in this contest! 
~Lori
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Thank you Lori! That will be a difficult choice to make on the Sexiest Granny of AP with you two sweethearts competing. Both very charming and talented. Also very good looking ladies with a great sense of humor. Tribute to both of you. Your friend, Don. OH thank you for the fantastic comment and applause.
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