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The girl i've been lately. ♥

Do you f e e l it?
The w h i r l w i n d of emotions.
Suggesting h o r r i b l e acts.
T e a r s are lifes oceans.

H o p e l e s s n e s s.
Living in a world of greed and hate.
Suffering here in a so called harmony.
A u n i m a g i n a b l e fate.

Enraged by thoughts of deception.
Thrilled by s c r e a m s of pain.
Looking yourself in the mirror.
A r e y o u r e a l l y back here again?

Is your mind r e a l l y telling you this?
Are your thoughts yours and yours alone?
Your m i n d is a l i a r.
And your house is not a home.

V o i c e s telling you right from wrong.
You k n e w i t all along.

H o p e l e s s n e s s.
P a t h e t i c minded soul.
You f e l l a p a r t at r e a l i t y.
And yet you say your heart is whole.

Do you feel it?
H o p e l e s s n e s s.
A u n i m a g i n a b l e fate.
P a t h e t i c.
F e l l a p a r t.
R e a l i t y.

Are you sure you can't remember?
H o p e l e s s n e s s.

A u n i m a g i n a b l e fate.

P a t h e t i c.

F e l l a p a r t.

R e a l i t y.

I bet you didn't r e a l i z e.


I am your r e f l e c t i o n.

Author notes

Well, my mate made me this assignment to explain why I sat and cut the shit out of my leg earlier this week and part two of this thing was to explain what I was feeling so I wrote a poem.

I was enraged, feeling hopeless, realizing year 12 is a hard thing to get through, scared about family problems, a friend was very upset..
the list goes on.

and i'm like, well what am i still here?
and just got shitty and hurt myself.
no lectures on cutting.
i will permenantly glue your nose to your arse.

Please tell me what you think

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Comments


  • autumns rising
    March 15, 2007
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    i prefer my nose on mu face thank you lol. this was excellent, love the format. great job babe


  • TommyTRASH
    March 14, 2007

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    "i will permenantly glue your nose to your arse" - Lol. Tahahaha! That would rather smell!

    This is a great write, I'm glad he made you do this, very good indeed. This is a window into your mind, soul and life and I wish you didnt have it as bad as you did. Its not fair. But remember, you always will have people who love you Remember that.

    Tommy xo