Pretending not to know he’s stepping on my soul.
Drop kicking the pieces performance brazen, bold.
Breathing pains of anger, I spoke not one line.
Closing my heart in prayer for he isn’t mine.
Not so long ago, I thought he was sublime.
Author notes
"Boys will be boys, and a man got to do, what a man has to do!"
A contest entry
- Quickie by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 6, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Mmmmhmmmm.
So well done and wonderfully expressed. The words are really nice and soft. I truly enjoyed this wonderful poem. Thank you for entering and best of luck. -
Very Good
This is quite well done
Like the way you expressed this
The authors notes are interesting
Great ending
Closing my heart in prayer for he isn’t mine.
Not so long ago, I thought he was sublime.
Rick
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So tru many times. Good short, well written. Good luck in the contest. Debby
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Clever in short, and your author's notes summed it up succinctly. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Love, C
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