Sailing heart see stars
Etched upon a black canvas
Ascend firework staircases.
Engulfing lights flood
Velvet visions in the mind
Ever making night's silver.
A contest entry
- Acrostic Sedokas {edit} by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended March 31, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautiful piece. I really like your use of imagery. Thanks for taking my challenge...
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Very beautiful! So much peace is felt in this write and done so well in two form combo. Lovely work.
Best to you always!
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Gorgeous-
Loves this verse You have penned Sweetness and what a form You have used
I have yet to try but will give it a whirl sometime in the future~
Images that stain the psyche with velvet visions...
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Aww, gee darling, you are always to good to me.
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My goodness love. You are so quick. This was the contest form. Was a fun one to try.
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Well You did a Fantastic job
You inspired me...
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