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Dedication

I can see the pain in your eyes.
I can feel trembling in your hands.
I can hear all your mortal cries.
I see how your spirit falls and lands.
Yet there is nothing I can do.
There's no way to take away the pain.
The fogs to dark, to black and blue,
The violence of your heart won't wane.
And there's nothing I can do.

Author notes

This is a dedication to my best friend Ida, and to another friend Becky, who are going through some rough times right now.

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  • walkingstick98
    June 11, 2007

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    This is a wonderful tribute to a friend. I love the way this penned out. It flowed very nicely..Great job


  • Frodofan
    March 18, 2007

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    Sad, but true. There really isn't anything to do. (Your poem before this makes a lot more sense now by the way.) Yesterday was good.