The strangeness in your eyes
is like a hollow tomb
It's concealed me in your darkness
it's led me to my doom.
The nights encased in shadows
and draped in silhouette
It's lured me with deceitful arms
it's brought me pain and regret.
yet I am not a stranger to you
for you've known me from my birth.
Please tell me what you think
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It isn't your usual form. So it wasn't what I expected. This is a nice little treat though. Kinda like after coming in the front door everyday saying, "Honey, I'm home," this time, wifey's at the door to plant a big wet one one me. LOL
Thanx for a kissing surprise. Well done, sister.
DEZ
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Intriguing
An interesting poem that breeds curiosity
and mystery. A dramatic but poetic piece
that drips in shades of darkness and gloom.
Very nicely written
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Excellent!
Wow Diamond this was a great write, i loved it, keep up the great job, you always write awesome poems, much love from your buddy
Poeticpieces
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Poeticpieces
Thankyou Timothy, it's been quite some time since I have writen a poem. I only wish I had the time and the inspiration to write again. Much love to you and thank you ever so much for reading.
Avril
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great
nicly done!
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Beautiful background to go with a stunning poem. I've missed you and All Poetry. Hope to see more of your work and catch up as well. Luvs yah *~ Poetry Within*~
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and you say your muse is lost.i knew that she was there all along for the home she has in your poetic essence is just to comfortable to leave.i'm sorry you missed the contest because i'm sure this would have been a real contender.i don't know what the contest was about but this can be seen in different ways but it is very intriguing and alluring.you are still the diamond in my poetic world.
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queenie
Thank you Joyce, you are always so kind to this diamond in the rough. Avril
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Ms Diamond, I've said it before you are a poet's poet; 'my' poet's poet. Plus an all round nice guy'ette. Thank you master (mistress) your poetry has hands and feet, it walks past and touches tenderly, with an enchanting smile included. ----
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Oh Diamond, I judged this. I don't know how you got it. I closed it then judged it.
It is a wonderful entry. thanks for entering.
Sam
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Samplette
Oops, I guess I'm a late comer. I got a bit distracted by the American Idol on TV tonight. Thank you for commenting to my poem though Sam and for your applause. Avril
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