you were the person that built me up,
the reason I'm standing on this soapbox, spilling out my thoughts;
and guts. now you're the person pointing and laughing,
now you're the first to cast the stones.
how could this have happened?
A contest entry
- Quickie by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 6, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Mmm, what a valid point said with such conviction. This is such a lovely, well written poem with such brilliance.
now you're the first to cast the stones.
Such a wonderful line with great imagery.
This is a very nice poem and I thank you for entering it. Best of luck in the contest. -
convicting somehow, strong and personal.. i looove the title [almost as much as i love you xp]
ily and good luck hon
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