in this moment unseen
to the eyes of the strong
they no not what i feel
or that something is wrong
something that would come
it comes for me now
in the darkness i've feared
i portray as a coward
i give in to the feelings
tears fall from sore eyes
worked so hard to keep closed
whimpers seeps out from inside
the noise makes me shiver
a chill down my spine
muscles tense from the stillness
eyes now opened cry
in more that a whisper
i hear sobing resound
my own voice is lost to me
giving a scream out loud
Author notes
when i was young i wasn't scared of anything... i don't know what happened
A contest entry
- Fear by Passionate Singe.
600 points, ended April 7, 2007, 24 entries
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Comments
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Wonderfully done. It pulls the reader in and gets the mind and blood flowing. Great job here.
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