it scares me when i look at you
and secretly admit to myself
that i can love you so deeply -
and with all that i am
it scares me when i see my future
lying in those beautiful eyes
and can't even begin to imagine
my life if you weren't in it
it scares me when you hold me so close
that the sound of our hearts
beat together
in one rhythmic, heaven-sent song
it scares me that all i can seem to
think about whenever i'm without you
is how long i'll have to wait until
i see that familiar face again.
it scares me how there are no words
true enough to describe
my undying love
and hopeless devotion to you
but most of all it scares me when
i see your hand fit perfectly with mine
and think of that dreadful day
when your hand begins to slowly slip away......
Author notes
Written July 1st, 2003
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I think you've really captured what makes falling in love so scary. Wow. Complete vulnerability with someone you cherish so much.
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fear is one of those things that holds love too, too tightly, strangles both and all around. A powerful poem, blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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sad but very good.
very deep and personal.
I really like this. -
incredible
that is an amazing poem -
Do Not Touch It!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so sad..yet so sweet..man you love this person soooo deeply..like your whole life is about them..it was really great..you did an awesome job expressing your feelings..your words fit so perfectly and the flow was GREAT...you did an AMAZING job..like I felt the poem..man..well anyways keep up the great work! Thanx for sharing!
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Thats really good-I love it!!xxx
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This is an excellent. And at the beginning of the love I have now I thought exactly like this...but then if the love is strong enough your fears will go away...and that's a glorious thing. You have described me to a T....lol. Well the old me. Thanx for a wonderful poem.......................Jessica.
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*stands proudly cuz she's the "fit to a T gal"
And yes'um, that is me, in a lot of ways,
beautiful, it is scary to read something you're thinking and feeling written by someone else.
Lovely write. Take care.
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-and thing of that dreadful day-
one problem.
should "thing" be think?
mmmz.
this piece
reminds me of soemone rather close
and would probably sum her up to a T
*smiles*
excellent work.
-ash-
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