Some times it feels like everyone’s watching you,
Anytime you screw up or fall down
They are right there
To point and laugh at your mistakes.
But never are they around
When you play hero
And save the day from disaster.
What is wrong with this picture?
Why don’t people see both sides?
Someone is setting us up for failure,
And I don’t want to be the next in line.
What is missing?
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this is so true. god, i really like the way you write. i love the realization at the end, the willingness and desire to forge ahead. thats what i tell myself every morning. awesome job.
love and rainbow kisses,
the existentialist
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I really like your topic but i think your right its missing somthin. I don't know what but somthin.
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i agree with what you said to me
i like what you're writing about and your poem is well written, i just don't think our styles are the same at all :] -
Awesome job on this one! totally true, never wondering far from the main point. and the last 3 lines rhyme a bit(just had to point it out) and i loved that. Can't really find anything wrong. Just check, just in case: Some times, or Sometimes. I think im right
anyways, this was a great write. To my lovey from your beloved lover
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the ending is really good. if people really could see both sides of everything life would be so much better. great poem.
sam -
that is soooooooo true... awesome... keep writing =]
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