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A Shadow Upon Time

Dear old friend, where art thou?
On those night so cold, I yearn for your touch.
A hunger rages within me,
thirst at the brink.
Where has all your warmth gone?

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  • DarkRomantic113
    January 14, 2008
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    Short and Sweet.


  • Hadji Murad
    March 30, 2007

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    This is gorgeous---so so so lovely. The words are intense and thought provoking and chilling in the aching need kind of way. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for entering and best of luck.

  • Mythoughtsunleashed
    March 13, 2007
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    jkdhfjsdds she came back!!!!
    I like this poem. it's cool. nice job!
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