Here I lie, crying, crawling
My last voice was calling
No one heard the sounds of my fatal cries.
I hope you're seeing through my eyes.
He drank the last of my breath
giving me eternal life and not death
Here I'll live forever on
Only at night and never at dawn
Now together, both him and I
We will roam on, feeding on a lost love's cry
Strange our love, we live
Happiness among other things we give.
Witch's night and a waterfall
We live like we live for nothing at all.
You'll never know what became of me.
Where I'm at...you'll never see.
No, You will not like what I have become.
But to me, a new love I have won.
Now I must part with one last goodbye.
It is your turn to live through dying eyes.
A contest entry
- Dark, Uplifting, Heartbroken, Whatever. by All u wanted me 2 b.
600 points, ended April 25, 2007, 56 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful write.. thanks for entering.
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this was an interesting write. allpoetry went down yesterday and I wasn't able to read it until today. keep up the great work.
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some people feel as if the the horn's are the way to go but look right in front of you and you might see what you wanted along sometime's it take's somthing bad to see what you wanted along and you never new love come's and go's but the pain stay's around well this was a great poem you alway's write great poet great thing's from great poeple keep it up always here
gdog the sign of my life
{rose}
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