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Dear brother...

Jody thanks for making me laugh,
thanks for being the brother that never turned his back on a sister,
thanks for sitting and watching the Discovery channel with me,
thanks for loving me unconditionally.

I am sorry I said that I hated you.

I cant wait to see you again dear brother.

In Heaven.

I love and miss you a lot,
Your sister Betty Jo

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Jody Lee Rose 4-25-1969 to 5-26-1994

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  • Thrilla N9nna 503
    July 5, 2007

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    I agree with the chick below me, this was short but sweet. and im sure your brother would be proud of your marvelous work.


  • ItalianRebelRoOcker
    June 23, 2007

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    Wow so short but so sweet at the same time.This is perfect for your family member.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

    ~Tia~

    GOD BLESS


  • BillyClyde
    April 24, 2007
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    So Sad

    I lost a brother when he was 25-I feel you pain and your love for him


  • Manish
    April 21, 2007

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    Great!!!!!

    Wow! This poem is breath taking right from its first line! To say thank you from the heart is always so beautiful and as I'm reading it, I can feel my voice shivering cos I've been touched by it, really! And yes, the line 'thanks for loving me unconditionally' was simply profound. Saying sorry is also very nice and great indeed! Not much people do that. 'I can't wait to see you again dear brother' shows your immense love for your him and the line that follows makes the poem too sentimental. It says it all - you love and miss your brother a lot. Great!!!!!


  • LonesomeAngel
    March 29, 2007

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    This brings tears to my eyes! As this piece is so personal all i will say is, i am soo sorry for your tremendous loss.
    LA

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