I'm dying inside
I've cried & cried
Now I'm just dying
I gave you my heart
I gave you my love
Then you left me
Sick & heartbroken
I was in a rough patch
People that were close to me
So close they might as well have been family
They were dying
So I cried and cried
I was down
I was hurting
Then you
One of the few people I was close to
One of the few people i truly loved
Came up to me
Kicked me down
Ripped out my heart
Stomped on it
Then you just walked away.........
Author notes
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A contest entry
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Comments
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i like this loads.
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this wouldn't be related to me would it
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maybe i dont rember when i wrote it (it probally is though)
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oh, wow this is really sad. sucks the way some people can be sometimes. i hope things get better.
sam -
OMG!!! So recently happened to me. And yhis decribes it so well it's scary. Just when I was in the middle of everything, my whole world, shattering the one person I loved more than anything left me. Just when I was at the point where he was the only thing keeping me here ... he tore my heart out through my chest and set it on fire. I love this poem because not only is it VERY well written, I can relate to it. Brilliant job, dear.
Megan -
I have been there so many times... awesome poem
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