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A Birthday Dad

Everyone has a papa
No matter what you call him
He is still your father
He brought life into you
Always love him
If he's not in your life
Pray that he will be alright
Love your papa
Happy birthday papa
I love you
And if your still somewhere out in the world
Know I miss you
A father is someone who shows his son
How to throw a baseball
How to show his daughter
What kind of boy will treat her right
Going out for ice cream
Or just watching a movie
Always tell him how much you love him
And he is your one true papa
One that day of his birthday
Let him know
That you'll always be daddys little girl
Or if you don't know your dad
Hope that he's out there
Getting himself on the right track
If your papa
Just doesn't walk this road anymore
Just visit where he lays
Always remember him

Happy Birthday, Papa.
hope it is one of many. ♥

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
i hope it turns out like you want.

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  • hopelessly-broken
    April 5, 2007

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    awww very well done! i liked it. its so true too, u captured all the things about a papa, and all the curcumstances one could be in! well written keep it up
    XoXoXoXoXoX


    • livingItup
      April 5, 2007
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      awe thank you. i just wrote what i knew and experienced of them hehe. with feelings behind it. thanks so much hun. ♥


  • thelordreigns gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    This is a wonderful poem filled with love and wisdom. I pray your step Dad will be kind and loving and that one day you will have a good relationship with your own Dad.

    It is great that you have found an AP dad that you admire so much. AP can be such a blessing. I have made dear friends here who have helped me through some pretty rough times.

    Keep writing - writing is life. - your fizzy friend - joanne


    • livingItup
      March 26, 2007
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      yea i know what you mean.
      one day i may go out an find my dad someday. but theres still alot of thinkin to consider with that one. my foster dad an step dad are cool. an my ap dad is the bomb. william foos aka the papa is a loving an caring man. he treats me like a daughter. much love to him. thak you so much an im glad you have people on here that can help an love in your life. thank you. ♥


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 14, 2007

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    this was sweeting and i like it, you did a wonderfully beautiful job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

    • livingItup
      March 14, 2007
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      awe thanks. i dont know what to say. but thank your. your sweet ^^. ♥


  • Myth Of Twilight
    March 14, 2007

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    Sweet

    this poem is sweet omg did i say that none the less i may hate my father cuzz what he did dont worry but i like this poem lot of emoshon i see you rilly care for ya daddy and i think its cool that he has sutch respect from you kinda wasint expecting thins from ya great job rilly great job a true peace of work


    • livingItup
      March 14, 2007
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      awe. im sorry. im guessin you dont have good memories with your father. well i dont really have a dad. i have a foster dad, my moms bf that i guess can be considered a dad, my step dad whose a drunk, an my real dad who lives somewhere in north carolina. i wrote this for my AP dad on here. he acts like one to me even though i have never met him. hes a great guy. yeah i dont know what to ever expect from me so yeah. thanks for your comment. means a lot. ^^ ♥

  • Revwilliamfoos
    March 13, 2007

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    wow

    this hit me like a tun of bricks and even brought a tear to my eye good luck in the contest
    love papa

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