Rare flesh, being ripped off the bone
By teeth dripping with poison,
addicting to the taste;
Chained to a rusted wall,
empty to the stomach,
heart oozing for more;
Rib and skin, decaying on the floor,
abandoned pet,
needing my abusive master;
I AM
On a table, chained by my arms and legs,
my pieces scattered around me,
being sewed back on, one by one
Author notes
The regular poem about how I was cheated on after a REALLY long relationship, and how my current boyfriend's helping me pick up the pieces. (Love you Honey)
A contest entry
- Who Are You... Tell me. by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 16, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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why didnt you tell me about this one(its about me after all) i love you....this is like the best poem evers love yoooou
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This is a bit crude -nothing wrong with that- but I can see the sweetness underlying the harsh words.
Well done.
Thank you for your entry,
Good luck!
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