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[ The days are dull, a boring color of white ]

The days are dull, a boring color of white
Flat and sheer as far as the eye can see.
Excitement fills the chilly air tonight
A show of lights will influence the jubilee.

The sun closes its searing eyes at last
And slips beneath the covers of the waves.
Tuxedos fitted so that none can surpass
A night extravagant their hearts will engrave.

The northern lights dance across the sky
Blues, pinks, and greens set the mood.
The ball that comes often but doesn't die
They slip and slide where love is brewed.

Their home is no longer white and aloof
But is alive with the dual annual dance.

They flash their orange necks as if in proof

That there shouldn't be any resistance.

 

Tuxedos wet but not ruined at the end of night

And no one goes home without an escort

The ball is done, welcome the dull, white light

As the pairs of penguins begin to court.

Author notes

penguins (obviously) is the animal that I chose and is also my favorite animal...

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  • xSquallx
    March 18, 2007
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    I loved it, penguins kick ass, rhyming kicks ass, and you kick ass!


  • saxophonicwolf
    March 17, 2007
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    very cute poem! It was quite a treat reading this piece. Thank your for entering and goodluck!