sit in the little room again
alone, again
the light has gone out
you want to scream
it wont come out
the dark sends chills through your body
you close your eyes
hoping to get away from all of your fears
but the faces haunt you
you see those gruesome teeth
and the horid stench overwhelms you
eventhough it isnt really there
but you can smell it
a grip tightens around your neck
you cant breath
one small screech gets out
the light comes back on
and the grip losens
mom washes away the tears
and the fears all run away
you feel safe
for now!!!!!
A contest entry
- Fear by Passionate Singe.
600 points, ended April 7, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
think about when you are alone with your one fear
Comments
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I liked the build up of tension it was great however the ending was a little anti-climactic
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This depicts how many of us see fear. Good one!
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im bored
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thanks for the comment
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