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March Birthday

May your day be filled

with joyous song

And you feel my heart

as I sing along

May your life be prosperous

and good

And this birthday wish

be understood

~

I wish for you

a peace of mind

I wish for you

to leave behind

All the stuff

that clutters the soul

To dream half dreams

until they’re whole

~

A birthday wish from me to you

A thirst for life, you shall pursue

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  • Whooplaaa
    April 17, 2007

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    very nice

    i have such trouble writing poems about random stuff liek this, i like it a lot, it all comes together in unison

    ~MIKE!


  • Jersene gold member
    March 19, 2007
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    This is a beautiful wish...for any month of the year. Lovely penning!


  • queen Moderators member
    March 14, 2007
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    This is a beautiful poem, the background is really pretty too. Good luck in the contest


  • capricornpoet
    March 13, 2007
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    A heartfull wish

    A most sincere wish to a friend, of wishes fulfilled
    with love .Beautiful and eloquent.


  • ma belle
    March 13, 2007

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    This was so heart-felt, dear Shalott sis. What a lovely birthday wish! I am sure your group appreciated it. ♥ Belle

  • deleteit
    March 13, 2007

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    I adore this background and the birthday wish was just so sweet! Best wishes in the contest


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    March 13, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwww this is just so sweet dear Dove...it's about my birthday tooAnd when I read it I thought this would be the best wish I could get on my birthday....

    Thank you so much
    XXJeannette


  • Megan Awesome
    March 13, 2007
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    I like this. Lol. It's pretty cute. My birthday isn't in March ... but it's still cute.
    Megan


  • The Poetic Angel
    March 13, 2007

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    sweet i love this makes me wish my bifrday was in march lol ...awsome background ... good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx


  • catz Moderators member
    March 13, 2007

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    Such a beautiful poem Good enough for a Hallmark card. And I love your background, too Is it your own creation?

    Ummm... just one thing, though... the contest calls for funny poems, but leave this one if you want to. You can enter more than one ( I think) let me check the criteria on that.
    Yep, it doesn't say only one entry... well it did, but I didn't mean for it to be that way so have changed it.

    Good luck in the contest


    Dee


  • DJ Harley silver member
    March 13, 2007

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    what a special birthday poem to all those born in march. well done dove. mine was march 10th.



    John

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