five lines to write about me...
four lines for you to feel what i feel...
three lines to keep you reading...
two lines to tell the truth...
one line to tell you im alone....
Author notes
A contest entry
- Quickie by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 6, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so creative and really nice. I smiled and laughed reading this. The background is cute and the poem is really nice. It's not some blatant attempt to be funny so much as just have a good time writing this. I commend that more than the "lol" humor. Amazing job and best of luck in the contest.
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Interesting
What a creative way to right for this contest.
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thank you.... and thanx for the applause....hoped you enjoyed reading it
*Denika*
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