The feeling that you inspire
When I look into your eyes
The emotion that comes is so pure
Unicorn’s Blood cannot compare
When everything around is crashing down
The feeling that you give me lifts me up
To happier days and peaceful beaches
For all you do, is whisper my name
And my heart does a tumble
Your caress lets me know that I am cherished
When the world seems that I am unfit for affection
You let me know through your eyes, touch, and voice
That I am blessed
Author notes
Inspired by the song by Christina Aguilera "Blessed"
A contest entry
- Thoughts for Another by GarbageCan.
2500 points, ended April 2, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is absolutly beautiful and whether you know her or not it hit home, she is a sweet child that though she is going through a hard time and does not believe it herself she is innocent in a way that I wish I and many more were
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Very nicely done poem I am sure She will love this poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Nicely done
nicely done, free sty seems to suit you. Yet i could wish it was longer and had more subject matter. keep it up and do not let reality get you down.
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